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	<title>Comments on: The &#8220;Pink Moon&#8221; Story</title>
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	<description>Reading, Writing, Movies and Mothering in Minneapolis, Mostly</description>
	<pubDate>Mon, 11 May 2026 19:59:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Ritalee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ritalee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Apr 2013 13:10:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Please keep it up. I read another great personal essay in Sun magazine yesterday that made me think, truth is better than fiction (although I love fiction so much). I also mentioned your story to Nancy last night after yoga, when we were discussing a class she took on dying and having a death plan, which she compared to the wild unpredictability of having a birth plan. My synopsis didn't compare to your writing, but she laughed pretty hard. I can't wait to hear about Dikembe Mutumbo.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Please keep it up. I read another great personal essay in Sun magazine yesterday that made me think, truth is better than fiction (although I love fiction so much). I also mentioned your story to Nancy last night after yoga, when we were discussing a class she took on dying and having a death plan, which she compared to the wild unpredictability of having a birth plan. My synopsis didn&#8217;t compare to your writing, but she laughed pretty hard. I can&#8217;t wait to hear about Dikembe Mutumbo.</p>
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		<title>By: girldetective</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Apr 2013 14:34:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you, Ritalee, for your kind words. It's so lovely to get a proper comment after wading through dozens of spam messages. Also, I often feel very exposed when I write something personal and there's silence in response. I've considered for a while practicing my writing by doing some of my stories: the wedding dress story, the why-I-don't-trust-astrology story, the Ed Rendell story. Recently realized I'd forgotten the details of my Dikembe Mutumbo story, so perhaps time to write them down to remember.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Ritalee, for your kind words. It&#8217;s so lovely to get a proper comment after wading through dozens of spam messages. Also, I often feel very exposed when I write something personal and there&#8217;s silence in response. I&#8217;ve considered for a while practicing my writing by doing some of my stories: the wedding dress story, the why-I-don&#8217;t-trust-astrology story, the Ed Rendell story. Recently realized I&#8217;d forgotten the details of my Dikembe Mutumbo story, so perhaps time to write them down to remember.</p>
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		<title>By: Ritalee</title>
		<link>http://www.girldetective.net/?p=5204&cpage=1#comment-35666</link>
		<dc:creator>Ritalee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Apr 2013 12:52:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I enjoyed reading your story this morning. Thanks!</description>
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